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Jesta
03-03-2003, 09:32 PM
This is my first post here even though I've been a member for a while. Thsi piece is kind of a last ride to burial for slain soldiers. It's about 85% done, I still need to add a few more details. Anyways, tell me what you guys think. ANY crits welcome.....
Eye
03-04-2003, 06:15 PM
I like the colouring and the background, however I think the main character is sort of hidden behind his beast. Maybe if the rider and animal was seen more from the side you'd get a better view of them both.

How have you done the colouring - photoshop?
dzpday
03-04-2003, 06:21 PM
Some problems in perspective and structure...
Jesta
03-04-2003, 06:52 PM
Thanks for the replies, guys.

Eye- I did the coloring in photoshop. I've really been trying to pump up my work , colorwise, so I've been studying different painting tutorials. Still a ways to go, I know. I see what you are saying about the rider being hidden. More of a side view would help, I think. Thanks, Eye.......

Dzpday- Could you cite the specific problems? So, I'll know what not to do....
JonasNoell
03-04-2003, 07:02 PM
Nice job on the sky and the grass, I think...
dzpday
03-05-2003, 05:14 AM
Originally posted by Jesta
Dzpday- Could you cite the specific problems? So, I'll know what not to do....

Er...First,the perspective is no good to express in your picture.To deal with Foreground and Background must to differentiate.

Look this picture by Justinsweet:
http://www.justinsweet.com/images/PAINTINGS/finalice2.jpg
gnarlycranium
03-05-2003, 07:55 AM
:eek: Where did his head go?!!
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