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KelvinGu
03-03-2003, 05:13 PM
Please critique the following images pls
Sorry for my english :P

http://www.5dmedia.com/bbs/uploadFiles/20032139351464509.jpg

http://www.5dmedia.com/bbs/uploadFiles/2002111516393081780.jpg
http://www.5dmedia.com/bbs/uploadFiles/2002121623511598912.jpg
http://www.5dmedia.com/bbs/uploadFiles/2002121623512933202.jpg
http://www.5dmedia.com/bbs/uploadFiles/2002121623514368891.jpg
http://www.5dmedia.com/bbs/uploadFiles/2002121623515546864.jpg
http://www.5dmedia.com/bbs/uploadFiles/200212162352887585.jpg

Movie:
http://www.5dmedia.com/bbs/uploadFiles/2002121713164160329.zip

suttercane
03-03-2003, 05:29 PM
very nice..... your images have a great all around look. nice texturing, lighting, and modeling. The only thing i can see is that the glass is way too clean. put some finger prints and smudges on it. nice work though :)

ZippZopp
03-03-2003, 07:45 PM
thats some slick work! very very nice

phoenix2k
03-03-2003, 07:55 PM
wow... very nice... almost photoreal! :thumbsup:

edit: what software / renderer did you use?...

Magic
03-03-2003, 08:15 PM
Nice renders, but as said before, they are a bit too clean, i've never seen a bottle-cap (i hope that's what it's called in english) which has been opened without scratches.

skilled vē
03-03-2003, 08:43 PM
Originally posted by suttercane
very nice..... your images have a great all around look. nice texturing, lighting, and modeling. The only thing i can see is that the glass is way too clean. put some finger prints and smudges on it. nice work though :)

im actully liken the cleaness of this wine bottle, looks like an actull wine bottle if it was brand new, great job :buttrock:

Royal
03-03-2003, 09:28 PM
Great work the only thing that bothers me is that the winebottle is not opened but still someone has poured a glass of wine.

betelgeuse
03-03-2003, 09:32 PM
the winebottle is not opened
I think the wine bottle has been opened. That's why the cork and corkscrew are laying right next to the bottle.

Daveaustin
03-03-2003, 09:34 PM
Royal... yes it is opened... can't you see the torn plastic around the top?

and the cork on the right? and also the fact that the wine only goes up to the shoulders of the bottle...

KelvinGu - stunning photorealism my friend! but WHY did you have to put a lens flare in the first image.. you could have substituted the flare for some amazing caustics!!

Trebol_A
03-03-2003, 09:53 PM
What do you want I say? :D
I love it the second image, ..... well, and the first.
Now, if you want i say something about the third,.... mmmmmm, ok, NOT WAR !! i prefer the red wine!

Great.

Blair
03-04-2003, 02:00 AM
Really beautiful work. I find the lense flare a little distracting. but it's all good.

KelvinGu
03-04-2003, 02:06 AM
Originally posted by phoenix2k
wow... very nice... almost photoreal! :thumbsup:

edit: what software / renderer did you use?...
3dmax4.2+brazil1.03

I like brazil very much:love:

KelvinGu
03-04-2003, 02:12 AM
The wine bottle has been opened
:p

aenema
03-04-2003, 02:27 AM
wow man. this is a very photorealistic peice. excellent! no critiques whatsoever from me. great work! :thumbsup:

Ionized
03-04-2003, 02:34 AM
Amazing work dude. The first image is senstation. I can't pick a flaw in it.

On the second image, theres something abut the CDs in the front which bothers me. They dont seem to be lit as brightly as the cup or magazine.

Also, the napkin seems to sag too much. I imagine that a paper or cloth napkin would be stiffer perhaps.

Otherwise, great work!!:bounce:

DeFnoTmAniA
03-04-2003, 02:38 AM
wow !!!! super!!!!

KelvinGu
03-04-2003, 02:48 AM
The cloth napkin would be stiffer

Maya Ayanami
03-04-2003, 02:50 AM
wow awusome I love that shader on the cup.:cool:

scott2600
03-04-2003, 04:48 AM
WOHA!!!! hella cool man....:bounce: :bounce:

gmask
03-04-2003, 04:50 AM
Nice but loose the cheesy lens flare

Eman597
03-04-2003, 05:29 AM
let me start off by saying those are very nice here are the crits
1. bad lens flare on first image, get rid of it
2. cd's need some specularity/reflection on second
3. the bottle cap is bent, so its obviously been through some wear, so i would add some scratches on it

:scream: :scream: good work, its photorealistic!

lurifrax
03-04-2003, 11:12 AM
very good work!
one thing in the first image: shouldnīt the cork be a bit broken since itīs been dragged out off the bottle?

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