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Marc Andreoli
03-03-2003, 05:01 PM
I did not have the time to work on this for a while, so I will just declare it 'finished' for now...:hmm:
Modeled and rendered in 3DSmax (standard materials and lights), outlines done with the fantastic cartoon reyes plugin.

http://home.earthlink.net/~andreoli73/cel.jpg
stephen2002
03-03-2003, 05:54 PM
looks ok, however the headphones seem to be clipping through her a little bit. That's the only thing that really needs fixing, IMO.
xeno
03-03-2003, 09:21 PM
agree with the above, i like the celle rendered look tho!
aor
03-03-2003, 10:24 PM
wow, nice.. im diggin this cell shader.. hey, how about some wires? kickass.. whats the plan from here? anim? thatd be cool.. more? aighty.... let us know


:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
DeFnoTmAniA
03-04-2003, 02:40 AM
super !!! j'adore le rendu 1!

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
lordmachuca
03-04-2003, 05:57 AM
this is great man. how did you aproch the hair?
if you could post a wireframe. looks good.
no critique.
requiem
03-04-2003, 07:05 AM
looks good. the hair is working out well. The chin and nose seem a bit odd though. The chin is a bit masculine, and the nose is a bit too round.
Great work.
aor
03-04-2003, 07:21 AM
Originally posted by requiem
looks good. the hair is working out well. The chin and nose seem a bit odd though. The chin is a bit masculine, and the nose is a bit too round.


heh... uh-oh.. im was diggin the face in general.. great package.. IMHO.. :beer:

dying to see wires...:scream:

:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
Facial Deluxe
03-04-2003, 09:34 AM
I love her !
Kamul
03-04-2003, 11:03 AM
Great shading man°°
wow really WOW :love:
xynaria
03-04-2003, 11:06 AM
Body looks a little squat to me, though that would be exagerrated by the view angle. Otherwise cool..I'm also interested on how you did the hair, works well. Cartoon Reyes is a fantastic plug in. :)
ashe
03-04-2003, 11:27 PM
Is that the demo version of Cartoonreyes?
nanabaky
03-04-2003, 11:41 PM
she's very cute, good job :thumbsup:
HapZungLam
03-05-2003, 12:11 AM
looking good? :thumbsup:
Blair
03-05-2003, 01:14 AM
Funky Chick good stuff.
draconix
03-05-2003, 01:55 AM
Looks good. Love that cell renderer.
BnE
03-05-2003, 02:20 AM
really nice.....
Marc Andreoli
03-05-2003, 07:05 AM
thanks for the compliments :bounce: and of course crits, I am here to learn.

Unfortunately, my home system crashed tonight (just did not want to start up...damn PC) I had to re-install the system and now all applications...grrrrrrrr. Sh#t happens, I guess.

Here is a quick 'collage' of some renders I did before...nothing overly amazing, but hey...
Ah yes, the hair is just a opacity map on polys. And I am doing this for fun, not sure where to go from here. Animation ? More characters ? Probably some environment for a change :D

http://home.earthlink.net/~andreoli73/cel2.jpg
.overflowed
03-05-2003, 09:40 AM
give her some technics ;)

Very good work :thumbsup:
John Lee
03-09-2003, 01:49 PM
Excellent render i must say!
Vushvush
03-10-2003, 01:20 AM
Great style, the rendering worked out awsome. Now just fix the 3D looking nose/mouth and you will have awsome cel look.
Risibility
03-10-2003, 04:54 AM
seeing that second pic makes alot of it easier to critique, her lips are too big and there is too much space between her mouth and her nose. stretch the nose down more.
Aeroplane
03-10-2003, 05:08 AM
the style looks very good, but i think there are something wrong with the
proportion with the body and the head,
fix it a little bit may get a very great effect.
but it still looks great right now,Nice image:applause:
dbach
03-10-2003, 08:51 AM
Maby this is just me but I think that the red you used on the shirt is just overpowering the whole image. Maby tone it down a bit to match the grey pants. But maby it's just me :) I do like the shading though.

Out,
Don
Marc Andreoli
03-12-2003, 01:25 AM
whow, thanks for the replies... about the proportions of face/body: I was not going for real, so it is a bit difficult to find out what is 'right' and what is 'off'. I guess the fact that I did not work with any reference is not helping :hmm:
But I agree with most comments, I need to tweak those proportions.

currently, my computer is pretty much trashed :annoyed:, can't get much out of it anymore...I'll probably start over with a new character once I get back up and running, which probably means buying a new machine. Oh well, I guess it is an investment in my education. Learning a little bit more every day, thanks to you guys :applause:
blindleader
03-12-2003, 08:51 AM
she looks great.

It's a shame you loose the definition of her nipples in the cel shaded renders :(
potion
03-12-2003, 02:47 PM
i do a same cel girl like yours before
same cloth:D
http://61.172.240.136/tt/gallery/3d/05.jpg
FranSaa
03-13-2003, 08:49 PM
Excellent. Very clean and effective.
Great work!

.f.
Hickory
03-14-2003, 01:24 AM
Dude, where are the decks...records...groopies :) Cool beans...
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