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Arcalinte
03-08-2007, 07:21 AM
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Title: A6M2 Zero
Name: Joshua Maurer
Country: Canada
Software: XSI

Class Assignment Model>texture>Render>Composite
We had to model a WW2 plane of our choice. This is my 3rd 3D model.
Spyone
03-09-2007, 02:54 AM
No bad at all, but there is some artefacts from the compositing. In particular on the left side of the image, we can clearly see a vertical, unnatural demarcation in the fog element. As for the composition, and this is truly subjective of my part, I find the planes too centred in the image. The image feels disequilibrated. The Kanji characters help in balancing the composition but the image is still off a little. Overall though, I like it.
edcorusa
03-09-2007, 12:22 PM
I agree with the other cirt. The fog needs a little work and shifting the plans would also help. Great job though.
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