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zenda
03-07-2007, 11:33 AM
Hey guys!
Need some c and c on one of my Wips, its an action sequence using one of the 3dfiggin models.. awesome models and rigs!
i did the shells using dynamics.and the lil explosions using expressions..thanks!:)


my animation (http://zendaa.wetpaint.com/page/Animation)

CaptainBarbosa
03-08-2007, 02:49 AM
The guns look good, but any time your character stands in one place her legs are absolutely still. In real life people are always moving even when they stand still, and it's very noticeable when that kind of motion isn't in an animation. Her feet also seem to stomp down rather heavily after each step.

TechnicallyArtistic
03-08-2007, 08:33 AM
Yeah. The legs are very stiff. Theres a lot of kenetic energy being transfered from the guns that aren't going through her whole body. It looks like the arms are shaking a ton, and then kinda going through the back and then the hips really aren't doing anything and the legs deffantly aren't doing anything.

Her walk reminds me of ed209 from Robo cop. Like this super heavy walk that jerks the whole body on the plant. My sugestion would be start with watching some john woo movies or something else pretty shoot-em-up and look at how people move.

Also, the shells are floating pretty slow right now. They could use some more weight to them.

zenda
03-13-2007, 12:28 PM
Hey guys! thanks so much for all the comments!Will definately work on it right away!

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