smoking room, tanja voronina (3D)

[Varjen]

A very calm and nice environment! I like it very much. The colour of the light makes the room very peaceful.
Maby the corner looks a bit strange... The wooden panel is ok but the wallpaper part seems a bit rounded to me.

[mikeldi]

looks really nice. for pointing something maybe the lamp are too white, I mean, textureless, adding some bump or rugosity...

The hole image looks great, very realistic. The atmosphere in there is fantastic. Congrats Tanja, great work.

[islaSyr]

cool work

needs some more light & Render studying...

[bperry]

The finish on the table is especially nice. The wall paper is very cool - kind of retro, kind of Victorian or Edwardian, and kind of Florentine, all mixed together. The corner does get a little lost by having two lights so near each other, but overall it has a good, realistic feel to it.


By the way, when I first saw the title of this piece "The Smoking Room", I thought I was going to see the office smoking room from the short British comedy series (The Smoking Room). But that's beside the point.

[Bandred]

Hi Tanja, I like this image oveall and think it works well in terms of your stated objectives. From a personal point of view, I have to agree with Varjen, that the corner looks stange. I would have tried locating the light on the left hand wall over the chair instead of in the corner. I also find the light in the top right hand corner a bit 'disturbing', since it has no obvious point of attachment. I'm undecided if the bowl on the table is a little too bright, but, having said that, it does draw my eye back into the scene :)

Take care and keep up the good work,

Mike

[immortalx]

Where Is The Ashtray Kid.

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