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InKraBid
03-06-2007, 04:48 PM
'lo everyone, been working on this little animation\ modelling piece for a future reel, would appreciate some feedback on it. Its been ages since I animated anything, so a rating would be nice, to give me an idea of how my skills REALLY are.. :)

http://s166.photobucket.com/albums/u109/InKraBid/?action=view&current=wipanimtestrender2.flv
TechnicallyArtistic
03-07-2007, 07:45 AM
Not bad at all. I think the motion is pretty good for the most part. The head might be a little stiff. I'm not sure if you're trying to do like a neck popping motion there near the begining or if they're just looking around.
The big thing I see right now is a lot of the motion is either slow or kinda floaty right now. Especialy on that half turn around. The motion is a little disjointed too, where one leg moves and then the other, and one leg doesn't seem to be affected by the movement of the other as much as it should be.

So for me, the timing could be tightened up. After that, I'll see if there's anything I still see, but overall pretty good for the few motions there.
InKraBid
03-17-2007, 12:49 AM
Hey, thanks for the feed. You're right about the float.. :)

New link - http://s166.photobucket.com/albums/u109/InKraBid/?action=view&current=wipanimtestrender3-1.flv
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