Dualistic Space, Neha Kakkar (3D)

[lordashraf]

Nice render, the lighting is good

[RichiD]

beautifull lighting but low-quality render :sad:

[Silverwing]

Really really nice architecture... but I didn´t
like that lighting... it´s like the light comes
from everywhere... Your textures could be
worked out more detailed... Although nice
pic...

[maantas]

looks cool. the only think i can say is
that your render looks like it had artefacts (might be its just jpg)
also ground texture looks like wood, but then the scale, er.. proportion of texture is tooo big
and also the blok (white on in front) well the light hits it in the way that it looks like it is framed, well like white outline, it makes an impresion that it is wery small and plastick...

[Nehak]

Thanks for the c & c everyone. I agree I need to increase the render samples. The lighting & textures I've tried to keep as close as possible to the ref pic I've used. Here's the link to it:
http://www.architecture-page.com/go/projects/dualistic-space.html

[neil09]

Nice work neha. Cool concept:thumbsup:

[Nehak]

Thanks a lot Neil :)

[a9studios]

Great lighting!

[speedline]

Nice work Neha, as always!
The lightning is well done, warm and diffuse.
Keep this good work ;)
Speedy

[Nehak]

Thanks a lot a9studios & Speedy :)

[sameergadve]

:bounce: cool render...pls do a hi res render dear...looking great all i want to add in that image is a lill more brightness n lill light coming from above the stairs like in the original pic...but hey as usual great work...:deal:

[Nehak]

Thanks Sameer :)

[Anthonyy]

Nehak

Thats one nice render, I really like the space, it has such depth but at the same time its balanced. You should be proud to generate somthing that has the same proportions and lighting from such a limited reference.

For me I feel that your shadows and lighting are a little too soft, the photograph is quite sharp and has more contrast than your image. Plus the noise, but I kinda like that because it makes the image look dirty & "real" which gives it more character.

If your really into your Architecture (which you obviously are!) you might be intrested in a range of books by Tashen Publishing "Architecture Now!"
http://www.taschen.com/pages/en/catalogue/books/architecture/all/facts/03390.htm

Hope to see more like this

Anthony

[Nehak]

Thanks a lot Anthony for the reply, and for the link to the books, I'll surely check them out :)
I've added the colored version of this in my portfolio, you can see that too if you'd like to..

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