View Full Version : Freshday, Esra Oktem (3D)
03-04-2007, 04:18 PM
Name: Esra Oktem
Software: 3ds max, VRay
i have been started this work for modeling a shaving brush for a forum but then i started to fill scene from my own bathroom and started to feel a fresh day:)
if we talk about brief explanation of scene
i used 3ds max8 standart hair and fur and convert it to mesh for vray gi and some fallof matterial for brush. after i finish i decided to build "in dream" version of the render with phs modification here is the link of it
thanks alot :)
03-04-2007, 07:42 PM
its nice picture ,simple desing but nice looking and clean rendering but scene could be rich
resim iyi,basit tasarım ama iyi bir görünüş ve temiz bir render fakat sahnen daha zengin olabilirdi.
03-04-2007, 08:37 PM
i didnt see v2,i think u did diffuse glow but its too much,if u can decrease then it will be good.What i mean with rich scene . its like caustic effect and other materials instead of glass or transculancy etc...
v2 yi görmemişim edit yapmak istemedim,diffuse glow yaptın herhalde ama çok fazla glow yapmışsın onu biraz azaltsan daha ii olur , zengin sahneden ne demek istediğimi açıklamak gerekirse , caustic efekt ve cam ve transculancy materyaldan farklı materyaller,tahta gibi,plastic gibi maddeler vb...
03-04-2007, 09:29 PM
Thanks for your comments i didint use caustic becouse of my higer render time's with single cpu machine i am sure that will be better, wait until i got quad cpu :P, i tought like you at first about wood or more texturing work at table will be fine but as you see there is alot of diffrent and collorful objects there and wood did'nt give me that fresh feeling as in white glossy material.
Teşekkür ederim düşüncenize ayrıca caustic kullanmadım ne yazikki tek işlemcili bir makinada oldukca etkliyor render suresini onun haricinde tahta uygulamak istemedim lamine beyaz ve ucuk mavi daha ferahlatici bir hava verdi bana gore zaten ortamda oldukca obje olduğunu düşünüyorum buda zaten oldukca karmasa yaratiyor bunu wood gibi karisik dokusu olan bir zeminle dahada sıkıcı bir hale getirmek istemedim.
03-04-2007, 09:40 PM
i am still waiting updates,and i wanna see full bathroom :) with your new cpu's power :p joke joke with ur desinging skills
updateleri bekliyorum,ve bütün banyoyu görmek isterim :) yeni işlemcinin gücü ile :p şaka şaka senin tasarım becerilerinle :)
03-04-2007, 09:57 PM
Very refreshing, wonderful lighting, towel is ultra realistic :thumbsup:
03-04-2007, 10:40 PM
Now that's how I want my bathroom to look like if I get a new house.
It would be nice to have a morning shave at such nice setting...
03-05-2007, 12:01 AM
Nice and clean render.
I like your materials a lot...
Great realism and detail.
Really nice scene...
Keep it up!
03-05-2007, 02:08 AM
Very nice! But I think you should consider tweaking the soap baskets material, maybe it will look much better with a higher opacity map contrast and I think it needs a bumb map or even a slight displacement. And the soaps will look better if you colour some of them, I think. The towel material looks good when face normal is nearly parallel with view axis (areas close to razor) but when the face normal is getting nearly perpendicular the bump trick fails (areas close to basket). I think an appriate amount of falloff should be used to fix this. One thing more; razors blade, I mean the head of it, is a bit small according to its handle. Maybe I am wrong, I don't know. Anyway, hope to see more from you!
It looks like it's been a tradition to write a following Turkish translation, well, I won't! : ) Cos I'm lazy!
03-05-2007, 06:55 AM
very nice and clean render:thumbsup:
03-05-2007, 07:50 PM
Nice and clean scene...the colors and light have the right mood...
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03-05-2007, 09:28 PM
Thanks for your comment ^^:)^^
03-11-2007, 01:41 AM
Beautiful scene, lightning and textures!
03-13-2007, 01:23 PM
Thanks very much :)
03-13-2007, 01:23 PM
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