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bagonasart
03-04-2007, 01:47 PM
This sketch was done few months ago, but just now I decided to finish this matte thing. I wanted to convey early morning mood in this scene while these climbers are searching where to start they`re journey in vertical way. So I hope you will help me with your critics and coments. All your oppinions are welcome. See you soon with new threads.

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3713/mattesketchzs9.th.jpg (http://img211.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mattesketchzs9.jpg)

SylvanMist
03-04-2007, 04:09 PM
Looks good. I think you can work some more on the clouds though, one of them has a sharp verticle edge. Maybe put some more detail in the background.

bagonasart
03-04-2007, 04:24 PM
Thank you for your coment. I`ll watch for this. This is my wip post in preparing stage. Only picking the right fragments from various photos. After this I will corect the colour pallete and all other things...

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/7548/pasiruosimaswx1.th.jpg (http://img58.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pasiruosimaswx1.jpg)

bagonasart
03-04-2007, 05:54 PM
I have noticed that the lightning goes down almost straight from the sky, so I decided to work with the light as it is, not creating a light like in the sketch, when the sun is somewhere in the west or east. I think Its working. This is my last thread today. I hope more critics and coments from you.

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/5447/pasiruosimas2xu1.th.jpg (http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pasiruosimas2xu1.jpg)

bagonasart
03-06-2007, 08:30 AM
One step farther...

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/2815/pasiruosimas3hl6.jpg

bagonasart
03-06-2007, 04:34 PM
Hello everyone, thanks for coments, not a lot at this moment, but I hope you will help me more in the future. This is my new post. I decided to bring some architecturical alements into this matte. Im not hapy with the sky and the colours are not which I want, so I hope I will solve these problems soon.

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/9962/pasiruosimas4yu9.jpg

bagonasart
03-06-2007, 07:47 PM
One more step...

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/7153/pasiruosimas5rw0.jpg

bagonasart
03-06-2007, 08:10 PM
Searching for some colour palette that is working better.

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/4216/spalvupaletesm5.jpg

clix101
03-06-2007, 08:44 PM
Looks really good :) imho, i would say the climbers have to go, i just dont think that they fit the scene too well. maybe instead of deleting put some more scene like ones in ;)

bagonasart
03-07-2007, 10:09 PM
Finished! I hope you enjoy it. Thank for help with your coments. See you soon with new posts.

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9350/baigtasmazesnislu6.jpg

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