myHighness
03-03-2007, 05:21 PM
Making a short animation to graduate this year.
Made an animatic, got some critic, but I can always use more.
Animatic is here: http://www.myhighness.com/s9y_log/index.php?/archives/48-Pitch-13-02-2007..html , and also a lot of the process can be found there.
Due to time problems, the whole rain part will be left it. Hate it to kill you darlings...
The ending isn't worked out yet, but after her fall, I want the dog to wake her up, she's in the mud with her face. Cleans herself up a bit, then continues her walk, confused, and maybe more hasty. In the end she comes to her house, but it isn't as pink anymore as in the first shot, more looks like a ghosthouse now. She looks through one of the windows, (made of dirty glass, with a lot of air bells (?) in it) and scares herself, her face isn't what she expected. It's changed by the glass. Glass slighty breaks (cracks will come in it). When it breaks, cut to black, lot's of dirty noises. During the credits it's raining (I can't completely kill my darling), and the house is back to her pink state from the beginning. Girl has cracked (or how do you say it? can't find the right word it, it all became too much for her, and she realized that).
Will make it 3d (obviously), and the animation probably rotoscope. I'm not that good animator, so I'll use as much reference as I need.
Model for the girl is almost finished, can be textured soon.
I'd like to have critic on the story, and more technical stuff, like camera work, montage, composition, you name it, that can be done better. It would be good to hear things from people out of school, and with a whole different background.
Made an animatic, got some critic, but I can always use more.
Animatic is here: http://www.myhighness.com/s9y_log/index.php?/archives/48-Pitch-13-02-2007..html , and also a lot of the process can be found there.
Due to time problems, the whole rain part will be left it. Hate it to kill you darlings...
The ending isn't worked out yet, but after her fall, I want the dog to wake her up, she's in the mud with her face. Cleans herself up a bit, then continues her walk, confused, and maybe more hasty. In the end she comes to her house, but it isn't as pink anymore as in the first shot, more looks like a ghosthouse now. She looks through one of the windows, (made of dirty glass, with a lot of air bells (?) in it) and scares herself, her face isn't what she expected. It's changed by the glass. Glass slighty breaks (cracks will come in it). When it breaks, cut to black, lot's of dirty noises. During the credits it's raining (I can't completely kill my darling), and the house is back to her pink state from the beginning. Girl has cracked (or how do you say it? can't find the right word it, it all became too much for her, and she realized that).
Will make it 3d (obviously), and the animation probably rotoscope. I'm not that good animator, so I'll use as much reference as I need.
Model for the girl is almost finished, can be textured soon.
I'd like to have critic on the story, and more technical stuff, like camera work, montage, composition, you name it, that can be done better. It would be good to hear things from people out of school, and with a whole different background.