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DOMiN 03-01-2003, 06:28 PM Hi,
Well, that’s the first time I put anything on CGTalk forum. I would be really grateful if you could tell me what should be improved in modeling as well as in rendering – it would be very helpful as I’ve started using the GI engine recently (FR) and I still have problems with lighting. I modeled this concept of new Renault Clio (obviously the model is still on work) in Rhinoceros 2.0 and this is one of the first renders I made.
Thanks a lot!!!
http://student.agh.edu.pl/~chojnac/obrazki/clio.jpg
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Hey DOMiN,
This looks very promising.
I recognised a Renault without having seen the badge upfront.
You've created a great car! Do you have any concept art or designs you used to model this one?
One crit: I do think that the front window is bit big, compared to the rest of the car. And something strange happens on the back of the car. Could be just the perspective, not sure.
Do you have another render from the backview?
Keep going.:buttrock:
Cheers.
EighthDecay
03-01-2003, 08:41 PM
that looks pretty nice, I also use Rhino2.0 and your model looks pretty clean, the design looks pretty typical of Renault styling, the rear section is really what makes it look Renault to me, even though I haven't seen one in person.
I think it could use some specular shine down the side belt area. otherwise its pretty nice.
Kamul
03-01-2003, 10:38 PM
Coooooool its so clean and nice and just cool°~°but I'm not sure about the window's color
DOMiN
03-01-2003, 10:47 PM
http://student.agh.edu.pl/~chojnac/obrazki/clio2.jpg
http://student.agh.edu.pl/~chojnac/obrazki/clio3.jpg
Thanks for the suggestions! The “strange thing that happens on the back of the car” is the hole for the back-light which I haven’t done yet. That’s the render from the backview. As you can see there’s still quite a lot of work to do to finish this car :wip:
Error404
03-02-2003, 12:22 AM
front end looks like something that would actualy be seen on the street! Nice!
The roof seems way to tall to me, and the rear looks very odd the way the rear window just drops off.
Good modeling tho!
squidinc
03-02-2003, 12:28 AM
Originally posted by Error404
front end looks like something that would actualy be seen on the street! Nice!
The roof seems way to tall to me, and the rear looks very odd the way the rear window just drops off.
Good modeling tho!
Renault actually made this car, and yes it really does have a rear like that :)
some images of it (http://www.renault.com/gb/produits/berline2.htm)
excellent modelling by the way :thumbsup: :applause:
DOMiN
03-02-2003, 08:16 AM
Originally posted by squidinc
Renault actually made this car, and yes it really does have a rear like that :)
some images of it (http://www.renault.com/gb/produits/berline2.htm)
excellent modelling by the way :thumbsup: :applause:
I tried to model a car which could be instantly recognized as a Renault car, something like a small Megane II. That’s why I designed this kind of the rear window, which tells that it can’t be any other car than a Renault. (Other cars with this unique rear window: Avantime, Vel Satis, Megane II)
Thanks for all the suggestions :)
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