2d WIP "coffee made me fly"

[Stimpy]

nice, really like it a lot.

if you dont know but without the title its kind of hard to tell wether the wings are there on purpose or if its just the background.. of course that might also be the fun of your pic..
maybe accentuate them a tiny bit better ??

[Jhonus]

thats real nice... hair doesnt look like its obeying gravity.

i think u could possibly be more inventive with that composition too. Since its got that hole flying thing, maybe u should give the girl some more room above the head.... make it less claustrophobic?

also agree with stimpy about the wings.

[tomb]

Looking very nice. I also agree that the wings don't look attached. I think the bottom lip needs more definition or take the line off the top lip.

[Apipe]

u guys helped me a lot...thanks !!
today i added some backgroud things on it..
and made the wings looked like water made..
could u give me more advices?

http://yaser.online.tj.cn/UT/attach/2003/02/23/124963-nono1-embed.jpg

[Apipe]

little update....i'm still thinking about the conformation.
added a flybot, a magicbot(from my sketch), a goldfish,her sketchbook and pencil.. :)
http://yaser.online.tj.cn/UT/attach/2003/02/26/126206-nono1-embed.jpg :)

[Stimpy]

i really like the fact that you can now see her wings more clearly, and i also like the look of them.. coming along nicely...

but as for those two creatures on her wings ??? i really dunno.. they kind of look pasted in and dont make much sense to me... they also ruin the dreamy atmosphere....

keep the fish in the window though.. its a nice sureallistic (sp?) touch, that you only get on the 2nd look...


fairy and that other thingy though: in my opinion unnecessary..

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