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JGott
02-28-2007, 08:53 PM
:) hi,
i have a variety of drawings , (if i triple thread im very sorry im new) that i would love to show you , but ill tell a little about myself first, i was 17 born in kenosha wisconsin,
i have been drawing since i was 5 <.< and still love it :) i want to move on from just drawing little dragon ball z characters lol. so for the past year i have started realism.
i currently live in florida, and taking art classes including acting.
i had taking some comp. graphics class that delt with ps cs2 , so i have some basic knowledge in that program but would love to learn how to do the little nifty tricks and effects on cs2.

i never really had a true "critique" other than a art teacher done to me so be kind of nice :P but truthful hints makes me a better artist i supose :)
i thought about going into some type of concept design.
ive looked into many industrial design colleges to got to like Accd. and Scad (savanah college of art and design) and it really inspired me.
but first things first though :/ got to know anatomy and basics first before anything else.

KNown weakness: i suck at value :/ or shading. ( i have been told not to smear your drawings from a foil from one artist and another saying to just use different types of pencils)

perspective i am not very well at either , most of my drawings deal with no backround , ill get to that eventually >.>
My saying" i can draw it but i cant make it happen" in other words i can draw the immage but cant make it look realistic :/

i heard studying from the masters and duplicated for only learning purposes works?
can someone confer that?

well, anyways i hope you like my work^^

JGott
02-28-2007, 08:57 PM
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b348/daisukes/img005.jpg

this is my first portrait drawing of someone else ever , i used a refrence photo.
what do you think?

JGott
02-28-2007, 08:58 PM
this is my second portrait drawing i had ever done < what do you think http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b348/daisukes/img004-1.jpg

JGott
02-28-2007, 08:59 PM
my first self portrait ever , i personly hate it probably because its a self portrait <.<
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b348/daisukes/img006.jpg

oco
02-28-2007, 09:47 PM
Funny that you hate the last one because I like it the best. The eye area is really good. Very strong and expressive. The lack of other detail really adds to that. Its very symetrical, especially the mouth which is a little unnatural but that could be desired. doesn't detract from the picture at all just changes the end effect. Nice work

jac3d
02-28-2007, 10:03 PM
nice work .......i lik e the 3 draw...

JGott
02-28-2007, 10:30 PM
thanks for the crits^^ , the self port was from me looking at my self in a mirrior from life and the others were from photos with bad light sorces : : so i had alot of guessing in the 1st 2 pictures. the third one i had everything provided for me.

i really appriciate your comments , it means soo much to me^^ tvm x 1000

Ivy00
02-28-2007, 10:57 PM
looking great, I can see a similar style in each one :)

JGott
02-28-2007, 10:59 PM
studying the human hand skeleton:
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b348/daisukes/img007.jpg

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