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JGott
02-28-2007, 08:17 PM
:) http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b348/daisukes/img005.jpg this is my first portrait drawing i ever did of someone else. what do you think? where are my errors and how should i improve myself in these errors? what are some techniques i should work on? any books you would refer? your advice is the best!

this is another,^^
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b348/daisukes/img004-1.jpg

http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b348/daisukes/img006.jpg
here is a self portrait from looking in a mirror i dont like it , probably because its a self potrait lol ><
Viking-Heart
03-01-2007, 04:45 AM
Well, I think they are all really nice... the first one could use some more definition, maybe? (Looks like Jennifer Aniston... am I right? xD), the second one kinda needs some smoothing. And the last one is the best, in my opinion. It has a very rare lighting, and the eyes are so expressive... I think you did a great job with it! :thumbsup:
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