View Full Version : Animation Reel: The Call (updated/smaller)
Shapiro 03-01-2003, 05:46 AM My student 3D Animation demo reel, "The Call," is completed.
Any feedback or comments are greatly appreciated.
Thanx
Nick S.
http://www.vfs.com/~nicholass/nshepard_thecall.mov
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dark_lotus
03-01-2003, 06:13 AM
Well, firstly the story is really IMO sick. Like I mean it feels like you've attempted humor and that hasn't come across very well.
Death is a very touchy subject and you don't want to kill characters that the audience cares about.
I personally wanted to see him triumph over his alcoholism.
Thats mainly a story crit. The animation flows well its nicely paced, the style is good. Camera felt a bit too close to the character.
I felt that the texturing was a bit plain.
Apart from that its very nice, but I do have a problem with the story.
Have a play with it in 6 months or so. And Good Luck!
emailsux
03-01-2003, 07:29 PM
Hey nick I duno if its just my slow connection at home but your movie never loads. I duno???
Nigel
:beer:
Beckett
03-01-2003, 07:41 PM
Hey Nick I'd love to see the final edit!, but I can never get it to download. What kind of codec did you use!
:cry:
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