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Fade of Light

02-28-2003, 02:06 PM

Hi there folks,

still need to add some dirt and grass (or something alike) on the wood... And the gold tip of the pen needs to be better.... Any other comments or flaws I should adapt, let me hear :)

(oh I cut off the upper and lower brazil banner...you see nothing of the edge of the planks and nothing of the garden)

http://members.lycos.nl/fadeoflight/images/judge2.jpg

MIRROR link (if lycos is down or soemthing)
http://fadeoflight.df2u.com/judge2.jpg

E.Z. Schwartz

02-28-2003, 03:23 PM

It's good. It looks like the paper was left out in the rain, I guess because you can see so much of the wood texture through it, it looks wet. The lady bug looks off a little, like you can tell it's a low rez model made for seeing far away, but it still looks pretty good. I don't like the strong light in the top left of the pic. It draws attention away from the subject. Other than that good job :thumbsup:

Fade of Light

03-04-2003, 03:25 PM

Update:

I might take the bug off, or remodel it ;
a dirty letter isn't nice to write to someone, so took it away ;
Placed a book on the left upper corner, so the light doesn't attract all the attention (I hope)... Still need to set the spec/gloss good enough ;

Any C&C welcome :)

http://members.lycos.nl/fadeoflight/images/judge5bew.jpg

When down try: HERE ("http://www.digitalrendering.com/forum/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=416&pid=3107)

mactabilis

03-04-2003, 05:58 PM

Looks very nice. Though the grass alignment and positioning seems too uniform and less natural.

BiTMAP

03-04-2003, 06:09 PM

maybe model the cracks in the wood becuase they just seem "wrong" when you look at it from diffrent angles...

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