My angle :)

[BlueMonK]

looks to me that there is something wrong with the eyes. they do not match or something
, angle wise.

[oco]

Nice work tho the left (Her right) eye is off. It should curve around the face more and also be at more of en angle to match the other eye. The right eyes looking good tho

[ocada-aki]

I just correct her eyes :)

http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q284/choojai/taryn003.jpg

[oco]

much better :thumbsup:

[Wildkine]

Hi Ocada,

I did a quick paintover of your pic, I hope you don't mind, just to point out a couple of issues.

The main problem with your lass is that the bottom of her face is muc smaller than the upper, and doesn't match the size of the nose and eyes. Also, the left eye, while much improved, can still be rotated slightly and lifted to line up with the other.

Finally, you can really punch the tone variation to give your lass some depth. Have a look at the two pics and see if what I'm saying makes sense.

http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p78/Eremophila/taryn003.jpg

You did a great job with the hair and clothes. A little fix to that eye and the jaw area will really make a difference.

Cheers,
Mez.

[ocada-aki]

Thanks for all :)

I sketched this for study in light and shape. I wanna develop her again. Oh! I always have problems with proportion and anatomy. -_-"

[Gisaiagami]

nice study
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