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borzavari
02-19-2007, 10:11 PM
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Title: Desert Storm
Name: Balázs Borzavári
Country: Hungary
Software: CINEMA 4D

This is my first car.i know the picture have a little faults but this is all this time can i do.:P I hope the desert feeling is look the photo.The background a little bit bleak but the desert is bleak.:)
Maybe the next car or picture have a more life and move but this picture need this.Because the feeling.And this feeling and the desert were born the Desert Strorm.
ZaneV
02-20-2007, 08:37 AM
Hi borzavari,

Nice very nice model of the car, and being your first car: congratulations!
The only problem with this scene is the background or the scene your trying to create around the car, from what i can tell you are wanting to depict this car in the middle of a wild/mysterious/hot and dry desert but your current scene does not show that. The little of the desert that you can see doesn't say much unfortantely, though you have got a very nice road. Perhaps to improve this, or for your next piece of work... try to showing the viewers more of the background without taking all the focus off the car... also check out car adverts in your local newspaper or car magazines, usually they have cars adverts featuring cars superimposed on wild rugged landscapes and they might just give you some ideas with composition and telling a story (i.e car in wild desert, car is good!).

I'm not very good at explaining myself but perhaps something i have said will help you. Anyways, nice car!

ZaneV
edcorusa
02-20-2007, 12:51 PM
Yes very good modeling. You might also try about giving the background a motion blur, as if the car is moving. Very good work.
Elinewton
02-20-2007, 08:38 PM
Nice model! The materials need more caution! The glass materials and terrain looks artificial!
Keep working! :thumbsup:
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