Blue Alien Story teaser 2

[Banshax]

The music is quite overdoing it. Best not to hide behind the music and let your animation speak for itselve more.

The character looks cool and the amount of animation is getting there. Certainly there is a lot of it.

[xfgsergweg]

I can tell alot of work went into this but I do have a few crits. The sound was a bit distracting so I muted it. The animation seems a bit slow in places, the fluid slowness of it all steals the life out of the characters. Be concious of weight. For example when he grabs that suitcase it looks like it weighs nothing.

[eov]

2 RogerA.

"The animation seems a bit slow in places, the fluid slowness of it all steals the life out of the characters. Be concious of weight." ----- Yes, you are right.

Thanks for your advice (comments). I will use them in my job. I study to animate and criticism is very important for me.

I try to make a qualitative product. In the final animation a music will be more silent and characters will talk.

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