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asharhaque

02-17-2007, 08:38 PM

Hi there,
This is my second post here. I am putting up a WIP and though I am a novice I would like to hear ur honest opinion. I have neither added any follow-throughs nor animation on secondary action elements. I have not even animated the cat squish(below the box) in the second shot. So aside from these I want you guys to critique my work in whether the animation is workign or not as per the poses and the primary motions. I would be very greatful if U guys can help me through this.:cry: It would be great if U guys can get back to me ASAP. The link is provided below. Thanks.:)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sj2Fsvva3kY

Kickflipkid687

02-18-2007, 04:21 PM

Hey,

Well the beginning walk is really... idk choppy but you said you didnt do any follow through or anything yet. But the speed of the walk is pretty good and overall it was a good animation. The sounds were pretty hilarious and the ending Meow... idk about that lmfao.

Matt

asharhaque

02-18-2007, 09:06 PM

Hi Matt,

Thank U so much for ur critique. I really appreciate it.:) I saw ur work on ur website and I am really impressed. The planets in ur solar system look good except there is a lot of glow in the sun.

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