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mohiuddin3d
02-15-2007, 01:01 PM
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Title: Simple Office Room With Shadow
Name: Mohiuddin Hyder
Country: Pakistan
Software: 3ds max, VRay

this is my modified file i change little bit setting and also change my light for better shadow plz comments its ok or i change some settings
guitarmunkee
02-15-2007, 08:57 PM
The scene looks better. Lighting could be tweaked a little more. The scale is off on the furniture, some things look bigger then others. The floor looks great though. There looks like theres no detail on the back of the computer, if your going to show that area of the computer you should put more details to it. Maybe the camera view make the whold scene look a bit off, if you could try changing the camera view, maybe placing it a little lower.

Hope that helps.
edcorusa
02-16-2007, 12:53 PM
I agree about the sizing. I would also suggest more detail around the computer and some cables. The texture on the wall look a little too large. Great feel and mood. I really like the lighting and modeling.
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