...Ahilya..my FirstVirtual girl...

[xeno]

I like it, but there is something about the breasts that seems a bit off to me, but i cant quite put my finger on it

[JonM]

Originally posted by xeno
I like it, but there is something about the breasts that seems a bit off to me, but i cant quite put my finger on it

they are fake ahaha :p


sorry, anways the model rocks, this is a great character!

[Hexodam]

only crit is that the eyes are too big

rest is great though :)

[RmachucaA]

How can you say her breasts are "weird" they are PERFECT!!
i wish my wife had breasts like those:scream:

nice modelling though, and the eyes are a bit big, unless you want that type of style.

[Jevin]

First of all, shouldn't this have a nudity warning in the title or something?

At any rate, the work is pretty nice, though I would complain that the eyes are too wide. Even if you were going for an anime or cartoonish look, they do have big eyes, but it's mostly big vertical, not horizontal.

Also, I know what's wrong with the breasts, it's the nipple placement. they should more or less be slightly down and to the side from the center of each breast, not straight up.

Honestly, I'd just put a shirt on her anyways to avoid the whole conflict, a nice plastic tanktop might provide an even sexier look. Just my opinion though.

Nice overall work on the face, but I'd do the eyebrows the same method as the hair, otherwise they stick out and look painted on.

[vorlon]

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Jevin
[B]First of all, shouldn't this have a nudity warning in the title or something?

I rather see warning in titles about models that are disturbing or disfigured with arms and eye ball missing;) , naked human body is a work of art.

And I love this model, I kind of agree that the breasts are too fake for my taste. But I like her looks overall.

[EdmX]

Tanx for the critics....
YOu know what... The eyes are little big...that's ok...I'm not quite happy with the final shape...Was really hard to get that.....

and rigth now is extreamily high poly...so..well, i fixed in the next one.. :]

I've a tank top for her already...but i'm working in some animation ,,,,,and the Top is cloth......>>
[hard]....

I'll try to put some better eyebrown. ......rigth now is just simple texture....I fixed the texture on the face b4....but i lost the file....
so I'm using the last saved .... [sux]

I'll render some stills and try to put soon as possible.....

tanx again.....

www.edmxcanada.hpg.com.br

[Lukashi]

its nice! dont give her a shirt put her in one of those poses where her arm is covering her nipples

[MaDeuce]

Lovely model. The only thing she is missing is scars under her boobs. Just kidding. On a serious note though, the boobs seem a bit to volumous under the nips, as compared to above them, unless the nips are done via texture where you can just move them a bit:airguitar

[Are3D]

WHO LET THE DOGS OUT...WOOOF WOOOF. Id work on those proportions and other parts some more, you have a fairly realistic body and then you have an extremely stylized face. Should choose one or the other.

[RmachucaA]

DO NOT TOUCH HER MELONS
they are exquisitevely proportioned, i wish God made women with those breasts......

keep dreamin'

[Are3D]

I wish god made YOU with those breasts.

[Mobra]

She looks fantastic!! What a amazing and exiting pair of tits!!!!! How many galoons has she put inn??

BOM TRABALHO eD!! Foi Max, Maya, lW???? DAHORA!!

[markdc]

Great body. I think the eyes and maybe the mouth are too big (unless you're going for a stylized look).

[EdmX]

..Yep...I had this problem....

REALISTC versus CARTOOn....

that's ok.......

I'll be working in the model for the next days....
to put some nice pics in here.......

good ideia cover her nipples...;)

hey...I made her on Maya....I'm kinda a Maya addictive......

e tamos ai na parada...let's rock.......

i'm not in Brazil rigth now...but....I miss there A LooooT...

:) ...... tanx..again ......

[Toulouse]

Your final result is pretty good, your workflow is a bit messed up tho, you should never skin in high res you will waste about 4 x more time. Organic model are better in nurbs in my opinion, I would have stich it together, the result would have been prettynice, and you wouldnt spent that long to skin it. The model look great overall, there is just the eyes which remind me the manga anime japanese look a little, but maybe thats the style you wanted, just a tip, next time do it in the proper order, so you will save alot of time, and in 3d time = money. Keep up the good work !

[The Time Serpent]

:wavey: :thumbsup:

[Luxo-Jr]

Good stuff dude. The only thing I think you should refine is the head, something just doesnt look right, cant put my finger on it.

[colt]

Just being curious, but what are those locators at her nipples for? :surprised :eek:

[Chan]

Originally posted by xeno
I like it, but there is something about the breasts that seems a bit off to me, but i cant quite put my finger on it
I would like to put my fingers on those breasts... Haha... Anyways, very good model...

[nanabaky]

good lookling model :thumbsup:
(i am sure she can't see her foot :D )

[Dusk108]

Good work people have already commented about the eyes but i'll add my to cents. The pupil should be almost touching the the top lid, you normally don't see the top part of the iris on a human regardless of whether it's toon or not. Well hope that helps.

[EdmX]

"""your workflow is a bit messed up tho, you should never skin in high res you will waste about 4 x more time. ......"""""


yep....I know that..........[ :P ]....
but..you know....was kinda a challenge....**** yeee.....
learning with the mistakes.......

the locators at the nipples....are ..
"jiggle locators" :)

i'm pretty busy this days doing others stuffs....[running for money] plus i am in a cyber caffe rirgth now....


i'll working a bit more on her the next week and upload some renders....
tanx for the tips everybody...

[Heber]

sweet model , shes cute , juss still needs work but i like it alot , :scream:

[Lunatique]

I like this. I prefer the stylized look over boring realism. :)

[EdmX]

hey...I've been working a bit on the top Shirt for this girl.....
I'm kinda exploring CLOTH.....
"ai ai ai"...
toutgh and heavy...
but..here is one shoot...feel free to add any coments.....

i've a couple of diferents tops...but i like this one better so far....

...that's it....

>>>>>c.y.a<<<<<<

hope finish soon


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

http://www.edmxcanada.hpg.ig.com.br/internacional/95/edmxcanada-2-fl_album3.jpeg

[Heber]

nice update , looking good , might want to extrude the edges and fold them in on the top to add more volume to it

[Don-Drennan]

Originally posted by EdmX
ps.....:::.... the breasts...yeah....silicon breasts.......
:]

Don't all computer generated women have "Silicon" breasts?

:thumbsup:

[JoBbE]

I'm smelling a pun here :applause:

great model! playing with the jiggle operators must be fun ;P

I think on the hand closeup there you can see some weired texture stretching but I might be wrong...

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