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ipdesigner 02-14-2007, 05:22 AM http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/150402/150402_1171434131_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/150402/150402_1171434131_large.jpg)
Title: corridor
Name: sherwin g. boston
Country: United Arab Emirates
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay
we are working on a corporate building right now. i made the 'water feature' in the lobby(ill try to post it later) and this 'corridor'. its my first proposal. still to be submitted to the client. comments and critics are welcome. thanks.
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simonenastasi
02-14-2007, 07:57 AM
my only crit is about that "rocky" texture on that rectangular thing, the one that holds the cubic lamps.
vijaymattam
02-14-2007, 08:07 AM
Hi,
Nice sharp rendering .. looks nice ... the reflections are pretty cool.... would appreciate if you can post your render and light settings... Good Job
jojo1975
02-14-2007, 11:30 AM
would it be the color like this ? is this just a concept or a final visualisation
working in an environment like this would make me thing to be in a hospital/laboratory since I perceive it cold. But since I didn't understand which company is it can be good (I didn't want to be negative in comment but just to express the feeling I have)
technically perfect (rendergins/materials,reflection etc.)
koolnits
02-14-2007, 11:45 AM
Good work buddy....!!!
I like it so much,render is really great...
Good luck.keep going....
ipdesigner
02-14-2007, 11:58 AM
would it be the color like this ? is this just a concept or a final visualisation
working in an environment like this would make me thing to be in a hospital/laboratory since I perceive it cold. But since I didn't understand which company is it can be good (I didn't want to be negative in comment but just to express the feeling I have)
technically perfect (rendergins/materials,reflection etc.)
*Thanks for the comments jojo1975, this is not the actual color. my intention for this is to capture a different mood doing sephia which is far diverse compared to the actual color:). its a 'corporate building' as i have mentioned above as well.
*btw, here's the original output.
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/7594/corridoropt1copy1000mx8.jpg
Silverwing
02-14-2007, 08:02 PM
I like the firs one! It has a nice
colormood. But you could improove
your lighting and your textures a
little bit. The pic seems to have
no depth... But although I like
the architecture and the look!
hi ipdesigner i have comments on the design itslef i see one set of light between the doors is better than i see its crowded .. and after that i mean the wall infront of the left corridor its empty maybe u can place a painting or work of art on the wall :) thats but i like the idea and the cieling i wonder if threres speakers or not ..
ipdesigner
02-15-2007, 06:11 AM
Thanks HOZZ (http://forums.cgsociety.org/member.php?u=242272)...me too not even so comfortable with those wall lights:wise:..iil try to remove maybe 2 of those on each sides leaving 1 pc on both sides
Regarding for speakers, fire detectors, AC grills..these are of course considered:wise:
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