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Nadz
02-13-2007, 11:04 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/7050/lakecgfx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
A plane crash a month ago has left a toxic gas. The resort is doomed. The gas still lingers.
C&C welcome.

JJASSO
02-14-2007, 12:34 AM
Hi Frank welcome to this forums, well here are my critics

first of all I dont see a seamless integration btw the different photo elements, I thin each one still has it own exposure and lighting and all together does not look like they belong in one single composition
take care of linear and aereal perspective, also scale is very important as yopu can see in the left building its windows are to big for that distance , compared with petronas towers
visual composition is not helping in your focal node ( the plane ) wich I think should interact more with the grass
lighting is not good , each element has its own keylight try to fix that
I will look forward to see your work
I suggest you go to the tutorials section in this matte painitng forums, you will find a lot of important knowledge there, about visual composition and color theory
cheers

Nadz
02-14-2007, 12:48 AM
Thanks for the crit Jamesvfx,
I'll try to fix all those issues and will post an update in a couple of days. I'll check out the tuts and try to get more on target. So much to learn and I'm new to this.

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