My Brand New Corner - Pt. 1, Victor Hugo Queiroz (3D)

[Nehak]

Very nice work..good attention to details! You might increase the render and shadow samples...it looks a bit noisey now..

[plakkert]

First of all, amazing job on the look and feel of the render so far, I like it!

But I have a few crits/comments:

- the floor (wood) looks a bit thick. Haven't seen those kind of floorboards
- due to the angle of the camera the buildings outside seem to be at a different angle, which looks strange
- as my collegue mentioned, the render is a bit too noisy..

Hope this helps,

plakkert

[edcorusa]

I agree about the floor boards. You might also add some kind of joint to them. I really like the mood and lighting. The ladder looks great.

[miguelton]

it seemed to me maxwel, by the noise and i it seems some sobreexposed...

but i like your work ;)

[danielo_1977]

Very good work man, congratulations !!

Some things i noticed on your image:

1-You have a incredible touch for details, the machine upon the woods seems amazing
and the ladder is very detailed, looks awsome
2-Great texturing ! And great Lightning...very natural...

Some Tips:
1-Increase your settings...you said you´re using vray, don´t be affraid of high render times.
2-The newspapers are not quite real...seems a little hard for me....i think they should be more soft...

[Lorenzo]

just work little more the sample light detail, and the metal reflexion, could be better, but I like the ambiant...

good work

[Ternstyles]

looks great, but the cord for the saw looks a bit to noodle'ish, they're very limp like soft rope, could be a bit more resistant i think, not so affected by gravity.

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