Rig test gone wild...

[noobie]

o that was nice but i think the part where he kicks the ball i dunno seems like the foot hangs too long in the air and also the part with the plane flying for a bit before crashing after the ball hits the boy seems.. kinda weird to me maybe make it a bit faster? i dunno it looks weird but the rest was nice ahah that was fun to watch

[mayazeus]

thot this came out nice.......i really liked the way the plane hit the ground in the beginning when he gets hit. Nice style. good stuff...keep it up

[mondo-ray]

heyyyy cool!
dude you have an awesome sense of weight and timing. good solid poses through out. he's behaiving like a little boy. overall it wasn't over done which was good. oooh and good job on the hold poses! i like your animation stylezzzzz.

one thing that got me was the boy's standing up from the crouching, when he's picking up the broken wing... his standing seems a bit linear? everything's happening at once. maybe i'm just nit picking. hehe.

good job dude.

[kujo79]

awsome work bro,

very beautiful poses and great sense of weight and balance. keep it up

[harmonic01]

Hey Ran,

Sweet animation and the rig. :D Sorry, haven't got time to do a proper critique, but first impression is that it great. :thumbsup:

[MegaManZZ]

Dude you got some Talent!!!

[leishman]

looking that's good.

[ChrisThatGuy]

It's looking good. I like the comedic timing, though I think the stomp could use more weight to make it look angrier. Nice work.

[Navi]

Looks great Ran. Your hard work paid off!

[spinal]

I love it...well done. Big thumbs up! :thumbsup:

[Ranimate]

Hey everyone,


Thank you guys so much for the warm feedback! I really appreciate it alot.
I agree with your critics and actualy I am tweaking and changing timing and minor things that bothered both you guys and me.

Ill post a new one soon (when Im done)

Again, thank you - noobie, mayazeus, mondo-ray, Kujo, harmonic, MegaManZZ, Chris, Navi and Spinal. :thumbsup:

Ranimate

[Ranimate]

Updated one,

Well, I updated the small thing, tweaked, re-timed and got rid of things...
would love to hear what u have to say about that.

http://www.ranimation.com/reel06/Movie_Shorter.mov

:shrug:

Ranimate

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