Character - First Character - C&C Please

[phreakage27]

here's the wire-frame...

[FallenSwordsman]

Looks great so far - presumably its meant to have an anime style to it. The mesh is nice and clean and I can't see any major problems with proportions. :thumbsup:

[phreakage27]

I was hoping for a little bit more of a response...I'll have her textures up by this weekend...any helpfull comments would be greatly appreciated...

[boxcrash]

It does look pretty good so far.

One thing is a bigger image showing various angles would be good.
Or close ups on certain areas.
Like on the wires, hard to see whats going on so small and the shadows.

One thing I notice is the shirt, under the armpits.
Is that deformation foreshadowing you have done there??

If not they might need to be tucked a little also, unless when arms fold down they crease and stretched across the shoulders probably or it will look like growth fat more than likely.

other than that, without seeing closeups or more details
great job for a first, or second or....:)

[Toulouse]

Good work, your poly count look pretty good, looks like you didnt wasted any

[Toulouse]

Good work, your poly count look pretty good, looks like you didnt wasted any

[phreakage27]

sorry it took me so long to reply but i'm working on 2 projects at the same time. Here are some more wires and a rough texture. I'm planning on redoing her without a poly limit and going all out on the textures...we'll call this one a warm up...let me know what i should change/work-on for my future attempt...

[phreakage27]

another...

[phreakage27]

the hands....

[phreakage27]

and finally the face... :eek:

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