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Timmay
02-10-2007, 08:48 PM
Just completed the sketch for an upcoming matte.
When the matte is done, I plan to camera map and have a fly through through some clouds for the reveal. Possibly a plane will be taking off the runway too.
Critique the crap out of it please.

http://www.digitaltimmay.com/images/basesk.jpg

byvfx
02-12-2007, 07:34 AM
i would rework your perspective, it's too forced. your vanishing point on the right side should be well off the screen( to fix the force perspective issue). I think your composition is a little blah, try flipping the canvas, this way the runway will lead the viewers eye through your comp. i think there is something odd about the hill in the back it just seems really too big.. if you put it in context with the size of everything else.

Keep it at it though! it will all come together once your composition in place.

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