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TimKaka
02-09-2007, 01:49 PM
Hi there, I did these pictures recently, on some forum where doing pictures with Half-Life 2's modification named Garry's Mod is a hype. I used my knowledge on the matte painting way to make this all. I get heaps of fine replies saying I'm talented, but I'm dying to hear what the big-shots that made it in this community think of it. Suggestions and ways to improve are very much appriciated!!

Here they are

http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/4061/combinecityzm0.jpg
http://www.phwonline.com/images/users/Kaka/cyclopvsrain.jpg
http://www.phwonline.com/images/users/Kaka/cyclops6ra.jpg
http://www.phwonline.com/images/users/Kaka/cyclops5ra.jpg
http://www.phwonline.com/images/users/Kaka/baest4.jpg
http://www.phwonline.com/images/users/Kaka/beastII2.jpg

Thanks for viewing!
JJASSO
02-10-2007, 03:18 PM
Hi tim, well I would not consider any of this a matte painting, but as you say you used the matte painting techniques on them,first issue and most important in all the images

I don't see light coming from anywhere. the first pic, it is really flat, try adding a keylight, shadows, those yellow glows are not ok, lights from windows does not look like that
other problem is perspective , most visible issue in first pic
hope this helps in next images
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