Toon For Reel

[SARC]

A few more view and I'll try to crit.

[d4rk]

I think it needs just a bit more detail. Is he supposed to be wearing shoes? If not a few details to show he has toes in my opinion. Looks cool though.

[Stimpy]

looking good so far...

maybe play around with his proportions a bit, like making the eyes bigger.. could give a bit more of a loony touch..

somethings wrong with the hands but i cant put my finger (har) on it.. maybe make them a bit thicker...

[Kuba1]

Thanks guys, keep picking things out that you diss like that helps me out a lot.

[Kuba1]

This is an update of my character. What do you guys think?:bounce:

[Stimpy]

colors look way better now. looks more like a coyote now than a dog. what exactly is it ??

still for a toon with a whacky face like that his other features still seem to be a bit on the normal side... and the fingers still seem to be a bit thin, making his hands look rather human and not very toon

[Kuba1]

Actually it's a mixture of a coyote a bob cat and a rat. I droped the tail because I wont have time to animate it for my deadline. But it's all good.

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