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sergeantT
02-07-2007, 05:03 PM
Hi

I haven't been animating very long--but I absolutely love it.
Please take a look at these 2 dialogue shots and tell me what you think.
Thanks so much. Crits are so valuable!

Here's the Link:

CLICK ME PLEASE (http://www.robtighe.com/animation_prog_reel_advanced.html)

bartlomiejk
02-08-2007, 02:04 PM
No idea what to crit...:)
Aniamation mentor rules!!
Realy great job!
Goodluck

sergeantT
02-08-2007, 03:40 PM
No idea what to crit...:)
Aniamation mentor rules!!
Realy great job!
Goodluck

hey thanks man :)

So far I only have crits from within the school. I need some outside -world views.

UKeTommyV
02-08-2007, 05:44 PM
awesome work. your doing fine . the only thing i saw, is on the second scene, his right hand , before he says "you say, did i miss anything" when he picks his right hand up it seems a bit twichy. other than that, looks awesome. :)

sergeantT
02-08-2007, 08:10 PM
awesome work. your doing fine . the only thing i saw, is on the second scene, his right hand , before he says "you say, did i miss anything" when he picks his right hand up it seems a bit twichy. other than that, looks awesome. :)

Yea, I see...
The fingers look sticky. i should smooth that out.
Good catch. thanks for the crit!

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