Dominance War II: JPons

[JPons]

Hi!

I finally have the concept of "Bruma" the assasin :)

Here it is...

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/7135/brumava7.jpg

I'm not sure about the feet, i have 2 ideas, make it as a "ninja" or more "mutant" both of them are on the concept.

C&C wellcome

Sorry for my bad english and worst drawing : D

[JPons]

Hi again!

I quick made a color concept for "Bruma"

I'll start modeling tomorrow I cant wait anymore :bounce:

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/8623/brumacolorml1.jpg

[Frostics]

Nice work JPons, the mask the character is wearing is pritty sweet.

[JPons]

Thanks Frostics, I want to give to the mask a ceramic look :)

[JPons]

update :D

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9902/wip1id6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


I'll try to finish the basic mesh today if I have time

[tucho]

Cool beginning, keep on working on it :-)

[JPons]

Hey Tucho!

I'm happy to see u here!

Thanks for the post, yours one is looking very good aswell, at least the concept is awesome ;)

[JPons]

Hi again!

I already have the basic mesh of bruma :buttrock: on the next days I'll detail him and I'll make his armour...

C&C always welcome

some views

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9814/wip1mh8.jpg

and wire..

http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/996/wip2pq2.jpg

[tucho]

cool work, my friend, you made a lot of progress in your model :-)

PD: check your sign, the link is broken

[dsolo]

Hey JPons, I really like your concept, a lot of personality in this character. My only (minor) critique in your last update is about knees, looks to me a bit "broken" maybe because of the size of the feets, looks like the knees bend inwards i a strange way. Maybe it is something it can be fixed whe you pose the character or maybe it's just me :P. Anyway really cool work.

[imtilongchar]

Ah! i like this one, nice character.

[JPons]

Hi all!

Thanks for the C&C!

Tucho : Thanks a lot! Still so much work to do! I'll fix the sign, dont know why its not working :shrug:

Dsolo : I think that the problem with the knees becomes from the protector on the legs, it covers the knee and u cant see them all, I'm agree, looks a bit weird, didnt notice it, i'll check it out :)

imtilongchar : Thanks! Are you on the challenge?

Today I'll post an update (at least i'll try!)

[JPons]

Update!

Its not much but its a bit more :D I fixed the hand and started to do the armour.

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/6876/wip3ra3.jpg

[imtilongchar]

Joan, ya! i am in this war.

[JPons]

Update!

Armour and..thats it :P it has too many polys, i have to reduce a lot and fix some parts before i get start the normal mapping :)

C&C welcome (as usual)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/555/wip4we1.jpg

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8250/wip5ou6.jpg

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2508/wip6hq2.jpg

[ScudzAlmighty]

looks really good so far, but i think he had a bit more personality with the longer tentacles

[JPons]

Hi ScudzAlmighty, thanks for reply :) I'm agree about the tentacles but i had to take them out because it looked a lot like several others characters, also i have more texture space with short ones.

[tucho]

looks cool Joan, keep working on it :)

[nachoyague]

great work!!!. i love armour design, it flatters him ;P . good luck!

[JPons]

Hi guys!

Thanks for ur support! I'm glad that u two like my dude :)

The mesh its finish by now, I have to step in Zbrush and start to at detail :D

[nikudy]

nice design on the armor.

the proportions on the torso and legs are off.

-claudiu

[JPons]

thanks for the reply nikudy, I finally changed the armour so its going to look a bit diferent :P

I wanted to give it that "unproportion" to give it a more mutant look :D

[JPons]

Hi again!

Update with the weapon, , i'm not 100% sure about the desing but i didnt have a better idea than use the shape of the arm to fit a knife-gun.

I also changed the shape of the arms and I modified the armour, the older one had so too many polys :)

weapon...
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/8898/wip7cq3.jpg

armed...
http://img483.imageshack.us/img483/2013/wip10em3.jpg

back..
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/4452/wip9rc3.jpg

front..
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/4673/wip8lc4.jpg


The weapon is 890 polys and "Bruma" is 5988 :)


C&C welcome

[ScudzAlmighty]

it looks a little like he's got a spaceship mounted on his arm, cool start though

[dsolo]

Hey Joan! Your are almost there! What will you do next? Add more detail in Zbrush/mudbox or something different?

Keep going! :thumbsup:

[JPons]

Hi david! Yes, my next update will contain some work with zbrush :)

ScudzAlmighty thanks for the reply! yes, it looks like a spaceship....COOL! :buttrock:

[agasco]

great work man! i like that weapon, looks very destructive :thumbsup:

[JPons]

Hi again!

Update, normal map finish and the (very) begining of the texture :)

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/8374/untitled4yl5.jpg

[JPons]

Uep Tomeu!

All the texture work its done! Just need the rigging and lighting to finish it :)

I'll post the maps tomorrow.

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8058/screenshot1vn0.jpg

[GavinG]

Looks groovy man. Depending on your rendering and lighting setup, you may be able to really sell the armor with a good spec map :)

Good work,
Gav

[valri22]

I like your skin texturing, especially on the feet. Good work on getting the armor down to low enough polys, normal maps look good on that.

[JPons]

Thanks for your messages guys! :)

Finally its over, I finish on time! :applause:

Winning Shot:

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/1039/winposead7.jpg

Beauty Shot:

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8416/beautyshotqk4.jpg

Construction Shot:

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/392/constructionji0.jpg

Texture Sheet:

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/2721/mapssl5.jpg

Concept:

http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/7750/brumacolormp3.jpg


:buttrock:

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