lost soul

[xeno]

i really like the sketch!

[Dearmad]

The overall proportions are really nice on this sketch.

There's somethig appealling about the way you handled her face. I think it's the difference in line quality you used there in contrast to the body.

The hair does seem a little quickly done- like you could have added some better and more precise detail. Actually the details to her hair aren't so bad but there are a few lines that take away from the verismilitude- specifically the swirlies starting behind her temples that are almost like concentric circles- I don't buy them unless you repeat the motiff in your execution somewhere else (which you didn't).

Attach the hand to the rock. The lines of her fingers don't follow the rock because there's a lack of critical detail there.

Hehe- so much criticism over a pretty fine sketch! Good JOB!:thumbsup:

[valeriu]

i just can't make her mouth look right,it looks weird
the hand is sketched fast,i'm going to work on the details later
the actual scketch looks like this:

[valeriu]

it's an 1000 dpi tablet i don't think i can get more detail on the hair;but it could be possible,i haven't study any tutorial on hair yet :p

[PvtRyan]

It's really nice, don't be too harsh on yourself, tsk only one positive answer in the poll possible :p
But the hands need more work, more detail.

[valeriu]

thanks guys,when i'll finish it i'll post the finished work

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