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zzzbye
02-05-2007, 04:37 AM
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Title: Study Room Desk
Name: Shawn Karan
Country: Singapore
Software:

A model of my study room desk. Modelled in 3DS Max, some textures made in Photoshop, rendered in Vray. Please click image for bigger pic.

moonhwa
02-05-2007, 11:58 AM
Very realistic model and render. keep up the good work ;)

Creature
02-05-2007, 12:56 PM
The mapping of the wood texture does not look right. There's a lot of stretching going on. And there doesn't seem to be labeling on the keyboard :)

But I like that it looks lived in. Not like those super-clean architectual renders we usually see.

islaSyr
02-06-2007, 06:12 PM
good rendering, good lighting

but u missed some details like ( keyboard keys letters , screen trademark , speakers trademark also the scanner and the cd drive)...
Don't tell me that you don't need to make adv's for those companies because you did it in warcraft cd ,the 3D world magazine and the philips DVD..........!!!

I think these details could give your work more realistic touch...

(nice mouse pad)

I hope you success..

salam..

zzzbye
02-07-2007, 04:32 AM
Thanks alot you guys! Really appreciate the comments and critiques. Will work on the details soon. :)

dtoxxx
02-07-2007, 08:02 AM
Is this a render of the actual work area you use to do 3D?

Don't you feel overwhelmingly cramped in such a small space?
I know alot of people who have a seemingly tiny area where they do their work, some smaller than this one.
I can't understand it.
I need a large area to work efficiently.
I don't even use a computer desk, I have an 8 ft long x 3 ft wide table for my workspace.
I use a Wacom tablet though too, and they require more desk space.

Anyway, I 2nd that emotion pertaining to the details.
Details are what set great artists apart from mediocre ones.

Doing the keyboard and tower logos is gonna be harder than just scanning the labels and directly applying them, which is why you learn more from an exercise like that.

These images are good, but those added details will make it so much better.
I don't know about others, but when I view images here I look specifically at the little details to see how far the artist was willing to go to create the piece.
The further the artist takes it, the better the image looks.

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