WIP basement passage...or something

[Taoizm]

just a few things right off.

First is that the image is too symetrical. Try breaking up the comp by clumping a bunch of smaller tubes on one side and large on the other. Right now you have almost a perfect mirror from one side to the other. Not really all that interesting.

also the lighting could use some work, maybe some colored lighting to set a mood. Right now it's nadda.

finially the texturing, but as you already said that you are working on that I won't hit them too hard. Just vary up the pipe textures, and have more concrete looking walls. IMHO

Hope that helps. :)

[Jhonus]

second what taoizm said. I also think the pipes diameter is too large for the room.

for some reason when i first looked at the room i thought i was looking at an air duct, and i think that is because of the large pipe diameter in relation the dimensions of the hallway.

also needs more subject matter, like a door or trap door... some signage or rubbish or soemthing

keep at it

[stephen2002]

I got a little bit of adrenalin out of that picture. It reminds me of one of my favorite games, Descent 3. It looks really good in compairson to the game graphics.

[Darkblade]

Thanks for criticism, I'll update that scene when I'll get enought time to tweak it...so much to do...


thanx

[Frinsklen]

Hi.

I agree with Taoizm when he sais that the image looks too symetrical, which is something you should always try to avoid in the first place. I also think your corridor looks too gray.

A couple of changes and your image will look much better.

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