Chris Bennett - A Few Short Animations

[FunkyCowie]

I can see your work has improved in the last year since I saw your demoreel, animation could still be a little punchier. University was let down by the script I think, it could have been funnier, and the segments were too long seemed like there was too much non-action. Fido was good, but I would drop shots 4 and 5, and instead of a cut back on the transition between 6 and 7 I would just pull out the camera quickly and bring the ending title in half way through the camera movement with the titles movement ending about .5 second after the camera has finished its movement.

[CBAnimator]

thanks a lot. I agree with a lot of what you said.. i think the next time i do something like 'university' i'll step the pacing up, so theres room for more gags as you say.
thanks again!

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