Still: Backyard V2

[stephen2002]

not bad, although that is an awful odd arrangment of items to just leave on a bench that is that deteriorated.

Good job with the falling apart look.

[McSpirit]

dig evry thing exept the grass. it dosent seem as realistik as the rest of the picture

[Luxo-Jr]

Looks really cool but I just dont like the arrangements as well. Is there a certain purpose behind those particular arrangements being there?

[santiago]

that's crazy man
I don't care about the arrangements, I think the grass could be improved, but this looks cool

[aenema]

this looks great, the grass is pretty cool, maybe a bit thick and tall? maybe not...theres lots of different types of grass :) :thumbsup: super

[lurifrax]

looks good, but i think the gaps between the plates on the ground is to big.

[aYs]

:bounce: thank you

what's wrong with the arrangement?
i'm not an art expert so maybe i did a big mistake ;)

what abou the grass?
too big?

*note*
-improve the grass
-inform about arrangement
*/note*

ok, thaks for you help guys

EDIT:
i wanted the gabs to be that big

[Brent Turbo]

The modeling, textures, and rendering all look just fine to me, but there's something about the overall composition of the image that's bothering me. I can't quite put a finger on what, exactly, but so much of the image is bright and saturated, it's hard to immediately find the area of focus... Keep it up!

Brent

[SARC]

I loved Day Of the Tentacle! aYs I have seen some of your previous images and together with this one they are incredible!

Great

[maestro]

The arrangement looks good to me. The center of attention, to me, looks like the toys that some kid was playing with. That looks like a little bedroom scene on the bench. So if it was some little kid that was playing with the toys, then the grass would have some damage from the kid stepping on it. The grass just looks less worn than the rest of the scene.

[HapZungLam]

not bad. but all the objects are too dull.

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