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PatrickAlessi 02-01-2007, 07:59 AM Hi Animators
This Thread will both contain 2D and 3D animations:eek:
I have decided to start a "fake" AM schooling which means that I'm going to "copy" the assignments and survive of what critique i can get :rolleyes:
Please critique my W.I.P:
One leg jump:
(http://www.alessi.nu/animation/luxojump2.mov)http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com
Done:
[/url][url="http://forums.cgsociety.org/"]http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com/search/label/Final (http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com/search/label/Final)
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PatrickAlessi
02-02-2007, 09:32 PM
Update:
www.alessi.nu/animation/luxojump2.mov (http://www.alessi.nu/animation/luxojump2.moc)
New:
-Re did the last part (But still not happy with it)
-Improved the first anticipation so it follows an arc
-Changed the timing a bit so that the anticipations and hang time works better
Does some one know why i get this green line in the right side?
It's compressed H.264 with QuicktimePro on windows!
Pleas help me if you know how to deal with it!
gunslingerblack
02-03-2007, 05:24 AM
hey man ur stuff is really lookin good, as you move into breakdowns make sure to work your timing and holds, arcs especially will become important in the next phase. you look like your developing a good sense of timing so just go with it.
keep going
PatrickAlessi
03-19-2007, 10:24 PM
Sorry... I forgot everything about the thread here on CGTalk.
Update:
http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com/2007/03/one-leg-jump-blocking4.html
I made this blog for my project:
http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com (http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com/)
That way it's a lot easier to update the forum threads!
What do you think about the last blocking pass?
PatrickAlessi
03-20-2007, 08:36 PM
Update: (Blocking5)
http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com/2007/03/one-leg-jump-blocking5.html
Come on guys, tell me what you think:)
PatrickAlessi
03-21-2007, 11:14 PM
And again:
http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com/2007/03/one-leg-jump-blocking6.html
It's mutch better right?
WyRd_Ralphie
03-22-2007, 08:24 AM
Hey dude :)
just watched ur jumping lamp animation nice work really love it
PatrickAlessi
03-22-2007, 08:54 AM
Hey dude :)
just watched ur jumping lamp animation nice work really love it
Thank you WyRd_Ralphie.
Glad you like it^^
Erith
03-22-2007, 10:58 AM
I really like it (blocking 6 on your blog!)
PatrickAlessi
03-25-2007, 11:51 PM
What about this:
http://patrickalessi.blogspot.com/2007/03/one-leg-jump-blocking7.html
Thanks Erith
good work
like the strech when itīs in the air..cool bounce and slide at the same time,,,
i would hold a couple of frames more in the air,,,just to try to look funnier...try out..
goood
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