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beej
03-27-2002, 10:55 AM
hey kids, this is my first attempt at character modelling in maya. I havent quite gotten to his fists yet & the kabuto (helmet) is still to come. Apart from that i think im almost ready to texture...id love some feedback...

(i probably should have hidden the poly count!!)


Thanks, Bryan.
Blackarts
03-27-2002, 12:05 PM
I think it needs some more detail. It's waaaaaay to simpe. His atms and legs look like melted plastic. Keep going!
Korgath
03-27-2002, 12:40 PM
Yep, more detail.. If your're not going for a cartoony character.

Nice start, though :thumbsup:
Koma
03-27-2002, 12:49 PM
yes you need some more detail ,check my march entry its a demon samurai !!!
beej
03-27-2002, 01:48 PM
thanks for the feedback guys, ill get back into it!
Jonny Bubonic
03-27-2002, 03:10 PM
I think the whole thing looks a bit too soft...some hard edges here and there could make a difference. Not bad for a first attempt though ;)
ZPitt
03-27-2002, 03:35 PM
WOW! Looks looks so ugly and that something about its face that looks like a kind of antique of CHINA!!!! I meant its outline isnt too uncomfortables looks!
beej
03-27-2002, 11:24 PM
I see that now too! some hard edges are going to wok their way in there.

Zpitt, its a mask called a menpo.
beej
03-28-2002, 03:31 PM
here's a quick update. thanx for making me spend more time on it im definetely happier now. i know his hand resembles a collection of cheap sex toys but it wont be seen in the shot i have planned.

i do have to move on now though (this is for a compositing reel!). ...time to redo his armour. so unless you can see anything that is drastically lacking or wrong...

thanx, b.
beej
03-30-2002, 04:45 PM
Here's another quick update. I wish I was faster! Oh well starting to come together I think.
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