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mohiuddin3d
01-31-2007, 03:19 PM
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Title: Nulakha Church
Name: Mohiuddin Hyder
Country: Pakistan
Software: 3ds max

this file modeled in auto cad and finel work done in 3d studio max and vray and also use photo shope for final tuch this church model by zore eng company in pakistan this is my first model render by for any company plz comments this file and tell me how can i more improve my 3d skill more

RobertF
01-31-2007, 04:56 PM
Ouuwww...

guy... thats to clean!

please add some dirt!

InsignificantSpec
01-31-2007, 07:49 PM
Lol yeah, I agree. It's not a bad start, there's enough detail on the actual building for the shot you want, but everything just looks too... uniform. Too clean. All of the potted plants, for example, how they're all perfectly lined up; and (sorry hope I'm not being too bitchy) the trees on the left look a bit sparse and plasticky. Mainly though I'd say work on the textures a little bit; a few bump or displacement maps probably wouldn't go amiss either, especially on the tree trunks and stuff. Keep at it!

leishman
02-01-2007, 01:59 AM
I feel this is a children's animation environmental effects.
your house's Map very monotonous. If you add a few children to get better results. :bounce:

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