The Mysterious Cave., Rory Lane Lutter (2D)

[roaring23]

Youtube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DMDe0DS-nho

Google Video:
http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5392464751828898635

[ploink34]

I think you pulled of the perspective, very well. Nice textures though out the whole piece too. But why do I feel like I should be yelling at the top of my lungs to the people on the top to "RUN!"?

[MoonVisionStudio]

Very well done! I really like the textured look you have in this one. My only suggestions are to fixe the perspective of the contruction guy between the white van and the tow truck/crane(?) it looks as though he is falling back. I think you can have more fun with the lighting within the cave near the creature. Let the light catch a few more sharp edges of rock. Great job over all.

[roaring23]

ploink34- quite right about the "run" comment. Check back tomorrow ;) hehe

Jose-Pardo- OMG you are SOOO Right!.... Wow, how didn't I notice that... I guess I was too anxious to move on to the next drawing.

Thanks so much for your comments :)

[siouxfire]

Great piece and I always appreciate a good time lapse. Congratulations and thanks.

And how long did it actually take you?

[Rudds]

I've just looked at your portfolio and you've painted the next moment in the illustration! Nice Idea! :)

[roaring23]

siouxfire- Well thank you :). In the time lapse video every second is a minute so if I painted continuously it would have taken 6 hours. In actuality i spend a fair amount of time staring at the drawing with the capture program paused, and I do watch the time lapse video on occasion to help me come up with what to do next. I think it's safe to add another 3 hours worth of pondering what to do next, and maybe another 2 hours of surfing the internet... looking at other people's artwork. The drawing was done primarily in 3 separate sessions, one on Saturday Night, a little bit on Monday, and quite a bit on Tuesday.

[plasteredcat]

cool image! :thumbsup:

I'd only add that the cliff on the right side of the picture might work better with brighter light, to reinforce the sense of clossiness to the spectator, or height...

[roaring23]

Rudds-- Yeah :). I just didn't feel right to not draw the monster, but I kind of liked the mystery and suspense of not showing it so... 2 drawings. Drawing the monster is my favorite part too. Didn't feel right cheating myself of it.

harachte-- It's funny that you say that because it used to be brighter then the rest of the rocks but I changed the other rocks to match. Logically it seemed to make sense, but I forgot about the value of atmospheric perspective.


Thanks for the comments :)

[elnady]

Great work man
i like it and thanks for sharing the wip :)

[waheednasir]

thats really good work, i enjoy looking at it...:).

[CGadrian]

wow ...man !

EXCELLENT work !
5 stars for sure !

[roaring23]

Well, it looks as though I may escape the bottom of the page with 4 stars which hasn't happened for me in a while.

Thanks to all of you for your comments.

elnady- Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoied the video :) I'll keep making them if people keep watching them.
waheednasir- Thank you very much. I liked your piece very much as well.

CGadrian- You flatter me. I didn't even give myself 5 stars. Maybe someday.

Thanks again everybody.

[andreasrocha]

Damn fine! What a beauty you produced here. The perspective is so well chosen!

+5

[CyborgJA]

Simply GREAT !

[OKMER]

Love the way you work(pondering surfing,etc,etc):grin:pretty much the same for everybody finaly.I don't feel so alone now no more:grin::grin:
I've a bit the same tiny little suggestions as Jose Pardo, but that's all.I love your textures and cameraview!!!Overall a very very nice image.And thx for sharing!:beer:

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