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neil09

01-29-2007, 10:18 AM

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Title: A Hotel Room
Name: Neil Ray
Country: India
Software: 3ds max, mental ray, Photoshop

It is a Hotel Room in a day view. Total render time taken 1 hour 22 mins in a P4, 1 GB RAM PC. Your comments is very much require to improve my level of works. Plz crit...

imtilongchar

01-30-2007, 11:20 AM

Neil, very nice render, love the texturing on the bed.just one thing, the table lamp near the bed is wrong, looks like the lamp is on but how come the shade is still black? some self illumination might help here. ok thanks & keep up the good work.

eem

01-30-2007, 07:29 PM

Use area lights and final gather.

edcorusa

01-30-2007, 08:25 PM

I like the layout and modeling. The lighting seems off. Just does not have that real feel to it. I wish I could afford a room like that. Keep up the work.

vijaymattam

01-31-2007, 08:25 AM

Hi,

Modeling is ok, but may be you shoud concentrate more on lighting part... The relfection in the wooden table seems to be more.... reduce the amount of reflection and make it bit blur.
Overall nice effort. Keep up the good work and keep posting.

GHOGHNOOS

01-31-2007, 09:36 AM

hi . well it's very good

GHOGHNOOS

01-31-2007, 09:38 AM

:thumbsup: hi . well it's very good

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