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[coCoKNIght]

I wouldn't say the lightning is bad but maybe some materials (door) have a too high spec?
Anyway, it's looking good, keep it up! :thumbsup:

[Phwhitfield]

Yes, you are right about the door. I allready darkened it, thx.

I'm having some troubles with mental ray and it's settings, so the render doesn't look exactly the way i want it. But I'm sure going to fix that.

[coCoKNIght]

I've noticed that above the door is a dark line which shouldn't be there I think, or am I wrong?
EDIT: Oh and are your lightsources casting shadows?

[Phwhitfield]

No the dark line is suposed to be there. It just should be thinner.

Because at this spot two boards touch. But i don't know if i still want to do that.

But thx for your attention to detail ;)

[Phwhitfield]

Time for a little update :) . Usefull critics are very welcome...

http://home.tiscalinet.ch/whitfield/pix/3d/gasse_2.jpg

[The FreakyOne]

is thsi one of those times? hehe if so , i like it :)

[Phwhitfield]

is thsi one of those times? hehe if so , i like it :)

sorry, i don't quite get what you mean by that.. what is thsi?

[The FreakyOne]

thsi is me spelling "this" wrong lol

[Phwhitfield]

I allready thought so... But i still don't get it. Of what times?

[The FreakyOne]

lol wow ur slow hehe, i ment is this one of those times where crits are welcome, hehe

[Phwhitfield]

Yes critics are usually wellcome nothing special about. I like the ones, that a normal human being understands... U know, those with normal sentences with verb and a noun if possible. But easy, i got your message. Finally...
:) :p

[Phwhitfield]

Almost done with the texturing i just have to think about a good texture for the glass of the window and i should render it with global illumination, but i need my computer... :D http://home.tiscalinet.ch/whitfield/pix/3d/gasse_3.jpg

[Carina]

The last update is a huge improvement to the last. Now put some really good lighting on it and you'll have a very good scene.

I think the ground texture could do with some work though, it looks very.. procedural at the moment.

What's this about needing a computer to render it though? How did you render the rest?;)

[coCoKNIght]

Originally posted by Carina
The last update is a huge improvement to the last. Now put some really good lighting on it and you'll have a very good scene.


I agree totally! :)
The ground texture looks ok for me...
Keep it up Phil! You're almost there :wip:

[Phwhitfield]

What's this about needing a computer to render it though? How did you render the rest?

I rendered it by hand ;) . No, what i meant was that rendering global illumination really reduces my computer's speed. And i need it to do some aother things. But i sure will render it sometime.

You are also right about the lightning. But i didn't really work with lightning and i'm more in a modelling mood right now. So i will render it with a good quality sometimes but not at the moment. I'll post an update when the right time arives. :)

I only updated the ground texture... Hope it works now

http://home.tiscalinet.ch/whitfield/website/pix/pix/gasse.jpg

[coCoKNIght]

Hey, the ground texture has been improved alot, it looks great!
Now work on the lightning! :wip:

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