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Artys

01-26-2007, 04:41 PM

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Title: Last fight
Name: Tim Borisov
Country: Russia
Software: Photoshop

Hello!

I would like to introduce for you the new work today. I one week thought out idea of this image and one full week drew this image. When I drew it I was guided by full realness of final result. I used real colors for creation of color of a leather, leaves of trees and other objects, I tried to make realistic focussing and game of light and a shadow, and I tried to take into account a uniform of the soldiers struggling in the east. The full size of this figure 3452 × 4112.

You can look at fine details of this work in the size in half of size of the original. http://www.tim.artvisual.ru/psd/last%20fight%20fragments%20small.jpg

I hope my work it is pleasant to you.

All thanks!

Sklaventreiber

01-26-2007, 09:47 PM

phew its nicely drawn but too busy for my taste. I think you need to create points of attention for the viewer this can be done by simple darkening of areas or lowering contrast of parts of the image.
also I saw some lighting inconsistencies around the stripes e.g.

Keep it up its already really nice

mull-gfx

01-27-2007, 01:58 AM

^^agreed, there's a lot going on with the various layers. The focal (the soliders faces) could use some more shadow/darker tones to make them stand out more. Beautifully painted and great concept thou buddy

gureiduson

01-27-2007, 02:56 AM

WOW! great art, and very emotive!

Samuraikuroi

01-27-2007, 04:35 AM

Privet Tim. Nice work. my only crit is mabey take out the plant/leaves on the top right and blur the ones on the left, or take some of the "elements of light" away from those areas.

Ialm

01-27-2007, 06:12 AM

Really really nice painting, I like the mood that you gave it, 4 stars.

Artys

01-27-2007, 06:18 AM

Many thanks for advice and thanks for responses!

roaring23

01-27-2007, 09:34 AM

Congrats on attempting such a difficult piece. I like it very much.

The problem that I have is that the dead soldier looks as though he is is not entirely limp, and hence he looks as though he is still alive... I think that the eyes and lips need to be changed, especially the lips which seem to be somewhat tightened.

Critiques aside I really like this piece. :)

Artys

01-27-2007, 01:46 PM

Ок. Thanks!:)

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