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[Nadz]

By the way, would someone be kind enough to tell me how to upload a larger image
Thanks
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/236570/236570_1169687438_large.jpg

[JJASSO]

Hi frank to upload a bigger file you can upload it to a free server , like this one www.imageshack.us (http://www.imageshack.us) thenin your new thread or post in in the insert image button you just paste the URL you got when you uploaded the image and voila ! you get a higher res image in a fast way

or now that you already have uploaded in the cgnetworks server just do the same in the insert imagge button , I just did it in your check it out

looking at you image, it is a nice compoition but a little bit boring, the focal node is in the center and because it is a photo background the foreground elements looks too perfect or CG
that neon light maybe should look different and the light should affect the wall where it is
I see some rough shadow cuts in the right red brick wall

[Nadz]

Thanks for the feed back Jamie,
I will clean up the right wall and make some changes. Landscape mattes are on the way
(hopefully soon).

[Nadz]

Here's an update
http://123pichosting.com/thumbs/352circle city slim 3.jpg (http://123pichosting.com/viewer.php?id=352circle city slim 3.jpg)

[Matellis]

Hey frank , I think right now your foreground is too flat , maybe add some more perspective in there , have those plants coming toward the camera as well maybe some lights , it would be nice to maybe see the sealing or the wall on the right to break it up some.

Cheers

[Nadz]

Thanks for crits everyone. here's an update.I think I'm done with this and I'll move on to some landscapes.
http://123pichosting.com/thumbs/2906circle city slim 3A.jpg (http://123pichosting.com/viewer.php?id=2906circle city slim 3A.jpg)

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