Still-Still Life 0031

[Xell]

very nice semirealistic look :)


know that piece from toeng.com or somewhere :D

[Victor_Mancini]

the money looks a little to white it should be more green

[Cyn]

Only crit I have is that the money looks like it's not made of paper, but plastic. You have a bill that is deformed (which is normally done by creasing the bill etc) but there are no evident creases on the surface, it just looks like bent plastic. Bout all I can say :)

[Shaykai]

I would suggest making the bills a little torn up, i find that normally i throw older bills into my 'money jar' and i keep the nice bills for my wallet.

[aenema]

i think the money jar looks real good, like real glass

[Pfister]

I'd have to agree with all of you on the color and the cleanliness of the money. If I were to do the scene over I would most certainly have changed the look of the entire image by adding some wear and tear. The glass would get some dust and fingerprints, the rubber seal would be colored, cracked and worn, and the metal hinge would have an oxidized look. The money of course has already been covered here with your suggestions.

When I'd put together the scene I was just learning Cinema4D and by the time I was ready to texture my models I had essentially tired of the project. I don't re-do renders usually keeping them as they were much the same way an artist using oils or water-colors won't take the painting off the wall and re-do it. I prefer to look, listen, learn and move on.

Ron

[seigi009]

i would like to add that the fabric looks super realistic.

[Error404]

Paper money usualy has creases in it all over, the coins are rarely all very bright and shiney. The glass jar looks very good tho!

[cyberjunkie]

Very Impressive Stuff! :bounce:
I'm no expert but I think the glass jar kind of gives a feel of clean reflecting metal. That money note looks like a reflection to me but then I maybe very wrong. Just my opinion :rolleyes:

[seed]

It looks fantastic:bounce:

[twidup]

I have to agree with seigi009, the lace/cloth/whatever looks great, and everything, cept the money is really well done.
The money looks too white and doent look real, needs creases, tears, ink marks, defacement.

-Todd

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