Sorceress of Aini folk, zengning (3D)

[irananimator]

Nice job.
Good luck.

Hamed katebi

[Obi]

I like the picture but I find the SSS too much for example the nose area.
And don't know why but my eyes keep circling around the face, not stick to the face.

[brentagain]

I like it a lot.
I like the combination of fur ,metal and leather together.
Her features seem somewhat caucasian to me ,rather than tibetan.
nice choice of color pallett also.
The face seems somewhat fuzzy looking,some details are lost especially the nose area.
I feel also that her right hand has an odd hold onto her staff[great staff btw:)
4*

[MarcoTomaselli]

cool...i liked...congrats...great FUR too...

[spliffmonkey187]

Very nice the fur is indeed very well done, can see you researched your armour very well. As brentagain said the nose could use some more detail but overall its a good piece, well done!

[Consideringthepickle]

I love her armor. She's really cool looking.

[DMNY]

The texture on the metal pieces and the fur part look fine to me.
To add what was mentioned by others (on the nose), the face and hands of the character seems to be a bit too flat. Working on the texture should add more depth to her.
Please see to the further part of the forehead. It seems to be badly cut and maybe some more work and lighting would correct this.
The beads from her hat also looks too flat.
I hope I didn't come out as harsh and my suggestions would help you. It is a nice looking piece but I do think you need to work at it more so it can become stunning. Right now, I'd place this along 'pieces to be finalized'.

[redwing]

yes,Thanks all above.I will modify the face and hands at my weekend.maybe a new head with current equipment.and I will darken the staff,so it will not effect the balance of the whole picture..
irananimator:I like Persia style also
Obi:I use the SSS default setting,and just change the color,I need to research and make it work better.
brentagain:I use Brazil/R/S for the last version,the skin shader works well,but I found no way to create shadow with Brazil render,so I turn to MR,the shadow works well.but got crashed during rendering if I use buffer type of hair,so I changed to mr prim type.maybe the amount of fur is too large(more than 80k).
spliffmonkey187 and Consideringthepickle:Thanks you like the armour,but infact it is the ceremony cap of the unmarried lady of this folk,when I took some photos of them.
DMNY:Thanks you said so much,the badly cut you point is the the part of the comeing down leather,but I will do some change to make it readable. yes to the beads.I hope the next version will be stunning.
Thanks again!

[ZhangYang84]

good job
继续加油:)

[redwing]

I changed it later than I imaged.http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/4440/4440_1172541447_large.jpg

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