still life - flowers

[MuggRender]

It´s nice and sweety. But need some lightining improvements

[kaber]

shading on the flower looks a little funny.
you need to do get in the dark tones,mid tones and highlights.
3 colors.. makes it look much better

good luck.

[clusterfuq]

nice :thumbsup:

but try doing something more interesting with the camera, like close up, depth of field type thing.

[peachstapler]

I agree with kaber. There needs to be some lighting adjustments. The shader on the flower petals is completely saturated and has no midtones/highlights. While you're at it, make more instances of the leaves.

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