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Totyo
02-21-2003, 04:08 PM
Well, first finished picture I post here. It still have some problems (big lips, big nose, etc...) but it's a done picture, which is hard to do for me :))
Thank you for your comments !
Max 5 - Amapi and thanks for Animax.it for the background picture :thumbsup:
http://www.totyo.com/skin3/3d/mzelle_outside.jpg

Cyn
02-21-2003, 07:55 PM
Very nice head, it's alot better than what i could hope to do right now. Only crits I could offer are the lips don't look to be touching so that could be why they looka bit bigger than they are. The nostrils almost seem to blend in too well with the tip of the nose, just seems to me like there is no real definition in the nostrils themselves which makes the nose look rounder and slightly artificial. Still..an excellent model in my books :)

lil' rothko
02-21-2003, 09:41 PM
yup, lips and nose need attention, but apart from that its very nice. I hate lips and nostrils, why can't we all just have spheres for heads. Or teapots.

:airguitar

Totyo
02-22-2003, 07:55 AM
Ya, I need to modify the nostrils I think, even if this is a finished picture... and I need to correct the transparency for the hairs which are up her left ear...

stephen2002
02-22-2003, 03:20 PM
the expression is very intense to me, hard to look at the picture for long. Maby try closing the eyes just a little bit more or do something with the mouth area.

The texture on the hat looks to be streching in places and the hair texture could be improved.

Cyn
02-22-2003, 10:13 PM
she's staring me down! :eek:

Totyo
02-23-2003, 10:37 AM
Well, I update it a little, I work on the nose and the eyes (and a little on the hairs, on the top of her left ear)
Thank you very much for your help : )
PS : I haded the wire ; )
http://www.totyo.com/skin3/3d/mzelle_outside2.jpg

http://www.totyo.com/skin3/wip/mzelle_wire.jpg

phoenix2k
02-23-2003, 10:41 AM
nice head!! like the others and yourself have already said, the nose/lips need a little more work... the new picture's better but still not perfect ;)....

Totyo
02-23-2003, 10:51 AM
Well, humans are never perfect ; )
I know it may be better, but I have to do another model from the beginning to do better and better and better ; )
I also beginning a guy (I'll post it in the WIP section I think) and I have to finish the maps (I hate doing the maps ;)

LPlasma
02-23-2003, 10:54 AM
I don't like the lighting, it looks like it's flattening out the model a lot.

Totyo
02-23-2003, 10:55 AM
Oups, I forgot the original version... sorry...
I think I prefere like that...

http://www.totyo.com/skin3/wip/demoiselle.jpg

Totyo
02-26-2003, 04:41 PM
asked by some, the Amapi v7 snapshot (Yes, it's an Amapi Designer 7 model ; )

http://www.amapi.net/bug/face_v7.jpg

spitfirefilms
02-26-2003, 05:47 PM
What is that on her head? I know it's a hat... but ???

Totyo
02-26-2003, 05:53 PM
But what ? I don't understand :surprised

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